Week 5, 6, 7
I had the strong bones of the website up, and I spent the next couple weeks taking critique input and working on implementing it. I had so mcuh good feedback from my peers, like making the sauna article feel sweaty, and that I had pacing issues. I tried multiple solutions for the “sweaty” feel of the sauna page. It started more cartooney, and it was not effective. I tried a few realistic ones and tried with the images on top of the other images. I kept pushing and pulling and adjusting small details. I think alot of the decisions I made got me in a bit of a rut and preventing me from making it feel more like a website and less like a print magazine. I also then implemented more of the typographic decisions I’d made in the print, like the extreme type weight changes within headlines, subheads, and navigation. I changed the meditation page to animate line by line, rather than page by page like in my print magazine. It helped the pacing immmensely. I focused on making the motion in my site meaningful, rather than just motion for the heck of it being animated. Like the ascii barbell moving up and down, as if it’s being lifted, rather than it growing in size like it was previous.